Critique My Advertorial

[1manshow]

Okay, new twist on my marketing. This is not for the faint of heart. But...I'd be interested in your feedback....unless you fit the categories of ....chair warmer...wannna be.....AL3....or any other misfit who has yet to prove themself other than being a windbag

 

[CHUMPS FROM OXFORD]

Catchy...but I'm not sure the term "rip-off" is warranted. Another less-obtrusive word would be much better.

 

[Crabcake Johnny]

Ditto - change "rip off."

 

[ins.dave]

Gotta agree with Chumps and Sausage bra.

Maybe sub "rip off" for concealment or shell game, etc.

Course I'm halfway into my Friday box of Heiny lights so ...

Hey, are they the ones with 1 cal. per bottle or is that Becks lights? Becks I think?

* Hey, what say you guys show us some metal and let Melmunch know that we are men enough to name call each other when we see fit? Alvin the sycophant is on one of his "suck up to the man" crusades ...