Hello - I'm presenting at a seminar with an audience of those age 50 years and older. I'll be adding my contact info but does the ad look ok . . any suggestions?
If you're doing a seminar why do you want them to call you for a quote? Shouldn't that "call to action" be in some information you hand them at the seminar?
Good point and . . I wasn't clear in the first post.
It's a full day seminar with several break out session choices. I'll be with two others speaking on care/insurance and how to pay for it. I have plans for materials to pass out at the seminar. This ad would go in a program book for all to see . . even those who didn't attend this particular break out session. Thanks for your reply.
Way too much information on the "ad". You sound like an insurance agent who is going to try to sell them something, anything.
"Hurry, hurry hurry, bring lots of money. Come one, come all. If you want a green suit we'll turn on the green lights. If you want a blue suit we'll turn on the blue lights." (Hope you have a sense of humor.)
Pick an interesting topic for your presentation, make it informative, give them valuable information that they don't already know.
Come up with a valid reason for them to attend other than simply listen to a "sales pitch". Add some humor when you do it.
I think you are setting yourself up for failure with that approach. Just MHO.