I Need a Comment for My Website

fcuzed

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all
i am a newbie ...i have a website ... but my traffic bad every day
please visit and help my to find what are lack from my website ok
comment me for my lack;)
at assurance-insurance.info
 
Re: I Need a Comment for My Website ^^

all
i am a newbie ...i have a website ... but my traffic bad every day
please visit and help my to find what are lack from my website ok
comment me for my lack;)
at assurance-insurance.info

I read some of your content and to be brutally honest, you need to have someone that can properly write your content for you in the English language. I am sure I would struggle with your native language at least as much as you are struggling with English, but on your website it needs to be much more readable.
 
Re: I Need a Comment for My Website ^^

agree, hire an english speaking sales copy writer...then worry about optimizing for traffic
 
Re: I Need a Comment for My Website ^^

We are not trying to hurt your feelings, but it is really bad. and you are trying to make assurance into insurance. it loses, something. find a web guy. we have a couple on this forum, to help you. It was so bad i had trouble reading it.
 
Re: I Need a Comment for My Website ^^

1. Ditto on the content.
2. your site was created on Created On:18-Sep-2011 04:47:59 UTC. Go to godaddy auctions buy an aged (4-10 yrs old) domain ALREADY indexed in google for $20-30.
3. Once you get your content writer lined up and a good domain, then do keyword research. Find kw's that you have a decent chance of ranking top 5 for. There are lot's of kw's u can make money on.
4. Use wordpress, many free wordpress themes that will do the trick.
5. Make sure u have a call to action header so people who are looking for quotes will be able to handle that simply without searching all over for a quote link.
 
Re: I Need a Comment for My Website ^^

There are many templates that can help you get your site looking better.

I'm not a techie, but many of the guys here will give you good advice as to where to start.
 
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Re: I Need a Comment for My Website ^^

What's with the "^ ^" everywhere?

And I second that you need a professional to write your page and someone who speaks the language well.
 
It looks like a site written by a computer with no direction and no human input, other than to add kirby ears to the top of each post.

It might be written at a 1st grade level.

You're more likely to make money with adsense on that page than you are selling insurance with it.
 
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