Insurance Marketing Through Insurance Junction!

[aryanbiz]

Dear Friends,

We are working on a new portal which we hope will bring everyone related with Insurance sector viz. Insurance Agents, Brokers, Insurance & Reinsurance Professionals, Insurance Consultants and Insurance Buyers on one platform.

To check the feasibility of the project, We have launched a small version of it on Ecademy, which you may kindly check by CLICKING HERE. The response so far has been good with more than 40 people joining in last 24 hrs. Your feedback and suggestions will help us to create a near perfect portal for Insuring Public and Insurance Professionals from all across the globe.

Thanks in advance for your support.

Regards,

Aryan

 

[Crabcake Johnny]

This makes no sense:

"Welcome to home page of Insurance Junction, designed to meet requirements of everyone related with exciting field of Insurance."

This is a poorly structured sentence. I believe what you're trying to write is:

"Welcome to the home page of the Insurance Junction, designed to meet the requirements of everyone related to the exciting field of insurance."

 

[theinsuranceman]

This makes no sense:

"Welcome to home page of Insurance Junction, designed to meet requirements of everyone related with exciting field of Insurance."

This is a poorly structured sentence. I believe what you're trying to write is:

"Welcome to the home page of the Insurance Junction, designed to meet the requirements of everyone related to the exciting field of insurance."

You are right. Poor grammar/spelling lowers the credibility.

 

[Guest]

Here is the profile of the guy running the site (what is that hat?):

Aryan Shrivastava "Business Listing Service, listing service, business promotion, opportunity sharing forum, Aryan Offshore Solutions, data entry, data processing" - Business Networking on Ecademy

and here is another biz he runs.

Aryan Offshore Solutions

Here is the LinkedIn profile:

Aryan Shrivastava - LinkedIn

and more:

Aryan Shrivastava's Public Profile

A simple google pulls up more stuff:

Aryan Shrivastava - Google Search

 

[aryanbiz]

This makes no sense:

"Welcome to home page of Insurance Junction, designed to meet requirements of everyone related with exciting field of Insurance."

This is a poorly structured sentence. I believe what you're trying to write is:

"Welcome to the home page of the Insurance Junction, designed to meet the requirements of everyone related to the exciting field of insurance."

Many thanks for visiting my club page and for sharing your observations with me. I have made the changes as suggested by you, hope it will result into better response from new visitors to my club page.

I also appreciate your honest opinion about our business concept. However, initial response from our connections is highly positive. But, it will be too early to reach to any conclusion.

Thanks once again,

With kind regards,

Aryan
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Here is the profile of the guy running the site (what is that hat?):

Aryan Shrivastava "Business Listing Service, listing service, business promotion, opportunity sharing forum, Aryan Offshore Solutions, data entry, data processing" - Business Networking on Ecademy

and here is another biz he runs.

Aryan Offshore Solutions

Here is the LinkedIn profile:

Aryan Shrivastava - LinkedIn

and more:

Aryan Shrivastava's Public Profile

A simple google pulls up more stuff:

Aryan Shrivastava - Google Search

Hi !

Many thanks for doing all the hard work on Google for me.
In all my profiles I used pic of my 5 yr old son. I understand it was not a very professional way of doing things, but somehow my 13000+ direct connections never had any problem with this. the pic was taken just before a fancy dress competition.

I am owner partner of Aryan Offshore Solutions. We are providers of some simple but highly effective services to our clients like Country Specific Business Listing Service and Comprehensive Business Promotion Service.

Insurance Junction is our ambitious project. With all my background in Insurance this is something I always wanted to do. I am sure that with the support of my online and offline friends this business will takeoff soon.

With kind regards,

Aryan Shrivastava