JacquesWerth
Expert
Your first "Telemarketing Script" (above) is 65 words long. Very few people will listen to more than 45 words and not get turned off.
Prospecting is not "telemarketing."
Good prospecting is presenting an offer that requires an immediate "Yes" or "No," response. That way, you can easily average 60 prospecting calls an hour. So, you can make twice as many calls per hour and find the High Probability Prospects - those that want what you are offering.
Start your prospecting offer with "This is FirstName Lastname."
Is "Biggity" you real name or a pseudonym? If it isn't, give your real name. You should also give your last name for both authenticity and compliance.
"Hi, there..." signals that you are about to hit them with a sales pitch.
"Is this a bad time" or "Is this a good time" is confirmation that a sales pitch is coming.
"I'm calling you tonight because I wanted to tell you about a special program the firm is running this month." It is a waste of 20 words, because it leaves the prospect in the dark.
Your satement: "We offer a special kind of cash value insurance for children that can be used for college planning or future retirement." is clear and concise.
If you add something about low payments or tax benefits, you have a good prospecting offer.
Prospecting is not "telemarketing."
Good prospecting is presenting an offer that requires an immediate "Yes" or "No," response. That way, you can easily average 60 prospecting calls an hour. So, you can make twice as many calls per hour and find the High Probability Prospects - those that want what you are offering.
Start your prospecting offer with "This is FirstName Lastname."
Is "Biggity" you real name or a pseudonym? If it isn't, give your real name. You should also give your last name for both authenticity and compliance.
"Hi, there..." signals that you are about to hit them with a sales pitch.
"Is this a bad time" or "Is this a good time" is confirmation that a sales pitch is coming.
"I'm calling you tonight because I wanted to tell you about a special program the firm is running this month." It is a waste of 20 words, because it leaves the prospect in the dark.
Your satement: "We offer a special kind of cash value insurance for children that can be used for college planning or future retirement." is clear and concise.
If you add something about low payments or tax benefits, you have a good prospecting offer.