Which is More Effective?

briko3

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Which of the following (if either) do you think would be more effective? What would you change? Of course the rates would be filled in.

Thanks for the help!!!!:idea:

Are you ready?

If you had a goose that laid golden eggs, would you insure the goose or the eggs? That’s how it is with your income.

People spend hundreds of dollars insuring their homes and cars, but many fail to insure what really matters…their income.

Without income, you would not be able to afford the other items OR the insurance you have on them.

I want to give you a peace of mind that no matter what happens, your family will be protected and your financial goals will be accomplished.

My name is _________and I am your local Financial Advisor. Let me put your mind at ease.

Here’s the process I use:

1) Call to either set up a time when we can meet or speak on the phone so I can learn about you, your specific situation, and your goals to see if there’s anything I can do to help.

2) After learning about your specific situation and goals, we will either decide that you’re on the right track or that there are some tweaks we can make to help your family become more successful financially.

3) Together, we will implement a plan you and your family feel comfortable with. We will do NOTHING unless you completely understand and are comfortable with the decision.

I look forward to helping your family!

Contact Information:

__________________________________________________________

Are you ready?

If you had a goose that laid golden eggs, would you insure the goose or the eggs? That’s how it is with your income.

People spend hundreds of dollars insuring their homes and cars, but many fail to insure what really matters…their income.

Without income, you would not be able to afford the other items OR the insurance you have on them and your family would suffer.

We are your local insurance agent offering Life, Health and Disability coverage and are affiliated with over 100 of the most highly rated companies in the US such as Nationwide, Prudential, Met, Lincoln, Genworth, ING and more to make sure you get the best rate available in addition to the excellent customer service you expect!

Protect your family and your way of life TODAY!!

Sample rates: (for $100,000 of term coverage assuming good health)

Age:
Cost per month:

35


45


55




Sample rates: (for $250,000 of term coverage assuming good health)

Age:
Cost per month:

35


45


55




Sample rates: (for $25,000 of permanent coverage assuming good health)

Age:
Cost per month:

35


45


55


65


70



 
Not awful, but the headline "Are You Ready?" is dreadfully weak. It's not going to get anybody to read on...

Need something like...

What If You Woke Up One Morning - But Your Paycheck Didn't?
 
That's a lot better. Thanks! Any other suggestions?
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No other suggestions or comments?
 
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