My First You Tube Video

Ok first off the red font hurts seniors eyes. Go faster, the speed was too slow. And the guitar solo guy got outa hand. Also, # 3, Qualitative over Quantative, what does that mean really? The next two slides really are ambiguous in relation to the set up of #3.
Good rough draft!
 
Ok first off the red font hurts seniors eyes. Go faster, the speed was too slow. And the guitar solo guy got outa hand. Also, # 3, Qualitative over Quantative, what does that mean really? The next two slides really are ambiguous in relation to the set up of #3.
Good rough draft!

Thank you for the excellent, constructive criticism. Good points. Just the feedback I was looking for...
 
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