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[moonlightandmargaritas]

This reminds me of another post from 5-6 months ago about cold calling health. If memory serves, the hook was the potential to lower your health insurance costs by 30%. Then John P. posted his two page free report on the 5 myths of health insurance and the 5 ways to save 30% in your health insurance.

As Bob (somarco) said -- the "save 30%" stuff is old, tired, and not trusted by prospects.

Something along the lines of "Big Money Wasting Mistakes When Buying ___________" works much better.

 

[Guest]

M&M put forth the idea of the free report. John picked up on it and got good results.

The "I can save you a buttload of bucks" is a tired pitch. Try for something more professional that doesn't scream like a $40 suit.

And how do you known how a $40 slut screams exactly?

 

[joshril]

I'm sure Somarco and Chumps have shared many $40 suits and sluts when Chumps was living in Somarco's basement...

 

[somarco]

Somarco and Chumps have shared many $40 suits and sluts

Chumps is a lot heavier than I am. Must be his diet of camel ribs and beer that does it.

As for the sluts, he wouldn't share. I would not have accepted if he did share. I am allergic to camel hair.

 

[moonlightandmargaritas]

As for the sluts, he wouldn't share. I would not have accepted if he did share. I am allergic to camel hair.

Good God! What's next, camel porn?

 

[arnguy]

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Lou, I think he is thinking of the famous Philly Cheesesteaks!

 

[xrac]

Good God! What's next, camel porn?

First goat porn and now camel porn!!! What next?

 

[lookin4abetterwayinpa]

First goat porn and now camel porn!!! What next?

Since we started at the gs and moved back to the cs, my guess would be Ardvark porn, but only a guess.

 

[joshril]

Ardvark porn is especially titillating. Or is that porcupine porn...?

 

[padthaiforlunch]