DM with phone number as call to action

I'm not sure why the personal attack was necessary.

And I'm certainly not saying the cards don't work. That wasn't my point.

Here is a typical FE mailer:

Final-Expense-Direct-Mail-Lead-Sample.png


It's not exactly the most up front and honest advertising in the world, is it?

- FE insurance is not a "program" at all. "Program" is there to make it sound like something the government created. It's a product someone is selling.

- "May qualify", "this benefit", etc.. "May be allowed to purchase" is more accurate, though "may qualify" sure sounds like you're applying for a government program. "Benefit" is again government language. I may qualify to to give McDonald's a dollar and receive a hashbrown benefit, but no one talks this way.

- Sure the benefits are tax free. But so what? Makes it sound more official though...

- There's the usual "resident of (state)" or "for residents of (state) only" stuff. You can buy life insurance in any state. But again, it's a "program" so we use words like "citizen of" and "resident".

- And of course, nowhere does the mailer imply that a salesman will be stopping by their home at an unscheduled time. If I'm sending something in by mail, it's natural to expect a response by mail. Sure, if you put your phone number, getting a call might be expected, but not door knocking.

The typical FE DM is designed to

- imply that the product being offered is some kind of government-sponsored or government-endorsed program, which is completely untrue.

- suggest that the recipient will be initially contacted by mail or phone, which is also often untrue.

Yeah and to top that off, this is the MOST direct card that a majority of us here use.

In states with poorer return rates, you can make it sound even more official with a couple freebies thrown in to increase the response.
 
I'm not sure why the personal attack was necessary.

And I'm certainly not saying the cards don't work. That wasn't my point.

Here is a typical FE mailer:

Final-Expense-Direct-Mail-Lead-Sample.png


It's not exactly the most up front and honest advertising in the world, is it?

- FE insurance is not a "program" at all. "Program" is there to make it sound like something the government created. It's a product someone is selling.

- "May qualify", "this benefit", etc.. "May be allowed to purchase" is more accurate, though "may qualify" sure sounds like you're applying for a government program. "Benefit" is again government language. I may qualify to to give McDonald's a dollar and receive a hashbrown benefit, but no one talks this way.

- Sure the benefits are tax free. But so what? Makes it sound more official though...

- There's the usual "resident of (state)" or "for residents of (state) only" stuff. You can buy life insurance in any state. But again, it's a "program" so we use words like "citizen of" and "resident".

- And of course, nowhere does the mailer imply that a salesman will be stopping by their home at an unscheduled time. If I'm sending something in by mail, it's natural to expect a response by mail. Sure, if you put your phone number, getting a call might be expected, but not door knocking.

The typical FE DM is designed to

- imply that the product being offered is some kind of government-sponsored or government-endorsed program, which is completely untrue.

- suggest that the recipient will be initially contacted by mail or phone, which is also often untrue.

For direct mail it's pretty direct... it says right on the card "to pay for your final expenses" and "this benefit will pay 100% of funeral expenses"

Try working the e3c card that talks about a way to reduce or eliminate your tax on social security benefits, then slip em an annuity.
 
I'm not sure why the personal attack was necessary.

And I'm certainly not saying the cards don't work. That wasn't my point.

Here is a typical FE mailer:

Final-Expense-Direct-Mail-Lead-Sample.png


It's not exactly the most up front and honest advertising in the world, is it?

- FE insurance is not a "program" at all. "Program" is there to make it sound like something the government created. It's a product someone is selling.

- "May qualify", "this benefit", etc.. "May be allowed to purchase" is more accurate, though "may qualify" sure sounds like you're applying for a government program. "Benefit" is again government language. I may qualify to to give McDonald's a dollar and receive a hashbrown benefit, but no one talks this way.

- Sure the benefits are tax free. But so what? Makes it sound more official though...

- There's the usual "resident of (state)" or "for residents of (state) only" stuff. You can buy life insurance in any state. But again, it's a "program" so we use words like "citizen of" and "resident".

- And of course, nowhere does the mailer imply that a salesman will be stopping by their home at an unscheduled time. If I'm sending something in by mail, it's natural to expect a response by mail. Sure, if you put your phone number, getting a call might be expected, but not door knocking.

The typical FE DM is designed to

- imply that the product being offered is some kind of government-sponsored or government-endorsed program, which is completely untrue.

- suggest that the recipient will be initially contacted by mail or phone, which is also often untrue.
So what's your alternative?
 
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