Well, the ad lacks the 'Whats in it for me' part.... Yes, you say the same stuff as everyone else, but nothing different.
The ad is basically looking for someone who has been around the block at least once, so they have been made every promise that you make at least once and have had every promise broken at least once.
You don't really give me a sense of credibility that it isn't just more of the same..... In fact, the ad as I read it somewhat sounds like you don't want to invest in me, since I have to bring my own leads, my own E&O (or buy it), be a solid producer, etc. Okay, I'll admit I'm cynical when I read these things, but many others are as well.
If you want me (or anyone else) to respond, you have to tell me whats in it for me, more than just production requirements and expenses I'll have. You need to solve a problem for ME.
Dan
P.S. I do think you are trying to do the right thing for new people, just the ad comes across a bit cold, you need to warm it up a bit.
The ad is basically looking for someone who has been around the block at least once, so they have been made every promise that you make at least once and have had every promise broken at least once.
You don't really give me a sense of credibility that it isn't just more of the same..... In fact, the ad as I read it somewhat sounds like you don't want to invest in me, since I have to bring my own leads, my own E&O (or buy it), be a solid producer, etc. Okay, I'll admit I'm cynical when I read these things, but many others are as well.
If you want me (or anyone else) to respond, you have to tell me whats in it for me, more than just production requirements and expenses I'll have. You need to solve a problem for ME.
Dan
P.S. I do think you are trying to do the right thing for new people, just the ad comes across a bit cold, you need to warm it up a bit.