Opinions on My Updated Site

[1manshow]

Thanks for the feedback, I'm constantly looking for ways to improve the "feel" of the site. The "copy" was generic stuff and I plan to update/upgrade it to more effective sales copy as time goes on...first priority is to generate the traffic !

 

[Y.L. Prinzel]

Well, you don't want traffic to get turned off by your content or you might not get them back again, so I wouldn't put the cart before the horse.

Good luck with everything

 

[tyler9953]

Looks good in my opinion. Don't know if you will generate trafic on your home page as there is no content there but the design looks good. I would suggest using more of the page to input relevant content for what you would like to quote. That is, if you are trying to drive traffic to your site.

 

[1manshow]

thanks for the suggestions on driving traffic, i will stick with the advice given to me by my seo guy for now and see if the traffic increases

 

[Guest]

Site looks nice. Font is too small for my eyes... but what I read was so boring that it didn't matter.

One question. You wrote:

We want you to be completely satisfied with your decision to join us. If, for any reason, you are not totally happy within 30 days from the date your insurance becomes effective with us, we want you to call or write and tell us. We will cancel your policy and gladly refund the entire unused premium you paid- no questions asked. No hard feelings either. Williams Agency does not charge a fee for early cancellation. All you need to do is call and speak with the licensed insurance advisor that wrote your policy or our office manager.

Can you cancel a client's policy? Don't they have to deal directly with the carrier for that? And why would the premium be in your hands to begin with? They pay YOU the premiums in Pennsylvania?

Al
InsuranceSolutions123 Agency

 

[1manshow]

so boring that it didn't matter.

Well...I guess that is critique Like I said, I'm working on the sales copy daily....still hard to make insurance sound exciting

And yes, we do collect premiums from a good share of the clients. Either way, we can cancel at their request via the phone, email etc and promptly mail the refund.

 

[Y.L. Prinzel]

Well...I guess that is critique Like I said, I'm working on the sales copy daily....still hard to make insurance sound exciting

And yes, we do collect premiums from a good share of the clients. Either way, we can cancel at their request via the phone, email etc and promptly mail the refund.

How can you cancel via phone? As I recall, they have to send something in writing to the insurance company during the free look period (I seem to recall a request to mail the policy spec pages back too)--I would think the insurance company could be facing major lawsuits if they didn't get that info in writing. But maybe I'm out of touch.

Don't worry about making insurance sound exciting, just make your copy informative and engaging. If you try to insert fake enthusiasm, your readers will know. Write with the same charm, humor and personality you use to talk to clients and let that carry your facts from boring to enjoyable.

 

[maksim]

oh my, how true.

looks like people are just copying text from other insurance websites. lol.

google that sentance and see for yourself.

 

[SuretyBonds.com]

thanks for the suggestions on driving traffic, i will stick with the advice given to me by my seo guy for now and see if the traffic increases

If you are using an seo guy that copies content from other sites you are getting ripped off and not dealing with an seo guy. He is probably your sisters friends brothers girlfriends cousin that thinks he knows something about the internets.

Refer to this: www-dot-seobythesea.com/?p=212

(Im too new to post links apparently)

Now go get your refund and thank me later. A good SEO is not cheap and I guarantee you are not paying an SEO wage for your self proclaimed seo guy. He doesnt know ****.

 

[1manshow]

brooklyn, I'm using Dave Miller,not sure if he's my sisters cousins half brother or whatever, but I think he knows a bit I also have a great deal of respect for Dave so I'll ask that you keep the mudslinging to PM's